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<P 0cm 0pt?>第二讲作业:每题<FONT face="Times New Roman">25</FONT>分 <FONT color=#f70938>总得分 96</FONT></P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>第一题:请标出下列句子的格律(古今韵都要标出) <FONT color=#e61a42>23分</FONT></P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>人民万岁<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵:平平仄仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵:平平仄仄</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>祖国长春<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵:仄平平平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵:仄仄平平</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>四海泛春潮<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵:仄仄仄平平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵:仄仄仄平平</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>国泰千秋盛<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵:平仄平平仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>仄仄平平仄</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>家和万事兴<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵<FONT face="Times New Roman"> :</FONT>平平仄仄平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>仄平仄仄平 <FONT color=#dd2248>家:平</FONT></P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>春风剪柳尖尖绿<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>平平仄仄平平仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>与今韵同</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>瑞雪妆梅淡淡香<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>仄仄平平仄仄平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古今韵同</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>幸福花开香处处<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>仄平平平平仄仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>仄仄平平平仄仄</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>长春日照暧家家<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>平平仄仄仄平平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古今韵同</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>第二题:请说出下列句子失律的地方 <FONT color=#dd2248>23分</FONT></P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>文章千秋事<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古今韵均是<FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT>平平平平仄<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>四连平,孤仄句</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>庭院四季春<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>古今韵均是:平仄仄仄平,属于“孤平句”,犯联忌。</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>年丰国强精神爽<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>今韵六连平,失去了对联的音韵美,属于孤仄句,古韵:平平仄平平平仄,犯“孤仄句”之联忌。</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>民富人寿气象新。老师:二、四六都仄,失律</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>勃勃生机天无限<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>上联今韵六连平,孤仄句。古韵四连平,,对联这样就失去了它的韵律美,</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>洋洋喜气地不偏<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>下联用今韵标准,:勃勃:与“洋洋”均平声,粘律</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>改革大势,澎澎湃湃雄千里<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>仄平仄仄,平平仄仄平平仄</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>新春祥和,明明秀秀动九州<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>平平平平,平平仄仄仄仄平</P>
<P 0cm 0pt?>存在问题:《<FONT face="Times New Roman">1</FONT>》:上下联的:“革“、”“春”粘律。</P>
<P 0cm 0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>《<FONT face="Times New Roman">2</FONT>》:如果按:“意节说”,“澎澎湃湃”和“明明秀秀”属于一个节奏点,无可挑剔。,否则两者相对属于粘律。请教老师:该怎样看待才是正确的?</P>
<P 0cm 0pt?><FONT color=#e61a6b>苏三:按照“意节说”,上下联相应的节奏点上也要平仄对立,澎澎湃湃”和“明明秀秀”还是不合联律,将“明明秀秀调换一下次序就可以了。</FONT></P>
<P 0cm 0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>《<FONT face="Times New Roman">3</FONT>》“势”、“和”出律</P>
<P 0cm 0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>《<FONT face="Times New Roman">3</FONT>》“新春祥和”四连平,这样可以吗?</P>
<P 0cm 0pt?><FONT color=#d52b4d>苏三:可以的,能指出一处失律的地方就算合格:)</FONT></P>
<P 0cm 0pt?>这是作业。理应学生做答,可是,我实在搞不明白,烦请老师们赐教!</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>鸟语花香,扑面春风行家喜<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>仄仄平平,平仄平平平平仄</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>水秀山青,宜人四季明景色<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>仄仄平平,仄平仄仄平仄仄</P>
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<P 0cm TEXT-INDENT: 0pt 36pt; -36pt; mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list 36.0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman">《1》 </FONT>此联句脚“香”、“青”粘律,“语”、“秀”粘律。要是将“水秀山青”改成“山青水秀”就合律了。</P>
<P 0cm TEXT-INDENT: 0pt 36pt; -36pt; mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list 36.0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman">《2》 </FONT>“色”出律,该平收。</P>
<P 0cm TEXT-INDENT: 0pt 36pt; -36pt; mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list 36.0pt?><FONT face="Times New Roman">《3》 </FONT>老师,看了丁香空结同学的作业,“家,明”出律,学生才明白句中<FONT face="Times New Roman">246</FONT>平仄该交替的。</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>第三题:请按格律填写句子。(新旧声均可,但要标明清楚)<FONT color=#e61a42>25分</FONT></P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>仄仄平平仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>新声:<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>鸟语花香日</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>平平仄仄平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>莺歌燕舞时</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>平平平仄仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>新声:<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>家贫盈墨宝</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>仄仄仄平平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>斗室有花香</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>平平仄仄平平仄<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>新声:<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>春风是夜园林过</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>仄仄平平仄仄平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>细雨明朝满地潮</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>平平仄仄仄平平<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>推窗述志拟红梅</P>
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<P 0cm 0pt?>想了好久,都觉得不满意。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT></P>
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<P 0cm TEXT-INDENT: 0pt 36pt; -36pt; mso-list: level1 tab-stops: list 36.0pt? l0 lfo1;><FONT face="Times New Roman">《2》 </FONT>阔水无垠,海到天边云是岸===连峦有顶,山登绝顶雪为峰</P>
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<P 0pt; 0cm TEXT-INDENT: mso-char-indent-count: 10.5pt; 1.0?>借作业之机,请教老师:《<FONT face="Times New Roman">1</FONT>》联中可以四连平仄或更多连续吗?不应该吧!讲义中讲:可以<FONT face="Times New Roman">2</FONT>、<FONT face="Times New Roman">3</FONT>个字互换平仄的。</P>
<P 0pt; 0cm TEXT-INDENT: mso-char-indent-count: 10.5pt; 1.0?><FONT color=#e61a42>苏三:对联单句中应是平仄有规律的交替,要尽量避免连平连仄的现象,有些特殊情况是可以放宽平仄的,比如领字,初学最好按正格严格要求。</FONT></P>
<P 0pt; 0cm TEXT-INDENT: mso-char-indent-count: 10.5pt; 1.0?>《<FONT face="Times New Roman">2</FONT>》“澎澎湃湃雄千里”,在这个联句中,如果把:“澎澎湃湃”看作一个节奏点,是否可以按四言联要求这个联句的格律?</P>
<P 0pt; 0cm TEXT-INDENT: mso-char-indent-count: 10.5pt; 1.0?><FONT color=#dd2248>苏三:这个句子的平仄为:平平仄仄平平仄,合乎马蹄韵,所以不必从用意节论来分析。</FONT></P>
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